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When I'm alone, I have the impression that the world is running out,
that runs in front of me, do not stop even for a moment
and I am staying away in the back, thinking of
meaning of life, the meaning of existance

When I am alone, the world loses colors
and takes the color of old lace that had long since lost its luster
And I see through this lace every minute of my life
every moment

When I'm alone, sometimes I think about you
You are somewhere on the border of perception, where the eyes can not see
I am almost sure that I miss, although we will talk again soon
It's more than scary ...

I am a strange man, without time, without the vision
but one thing is certain
When I'm alone, I look at the world differently
Well, it's good that I sometimes am alone...
Just some random poem.
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GUDRUN355 Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2013
Fine, contemplative poetry!
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Ramsay-the-Bastard Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2013
Thank you :)
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GUDRUN355 Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2013
Very welcome! :)
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waiting-for-wings Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
its nice :)
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:iconramsay-the-bastard:
Ramsay-the-Bastard Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2013
Thanks ^^
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Herrbatka Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Powerful! :)
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Ramsay-the-Bastard Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2013
Haha :lol:
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The-Caligula Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2013
Great poem, Ram.
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Ramsay-the-Bastard Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2013
Thank you ;)
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suezn Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2013
Very lovely. Thought provoking. Reminds me in a way of the messages of "don't go to sleep" via Rumi.
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